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Looking for Some Honest Critique

  • June 11, 2012 5:18 PM PDT

    I make comedy videos and as we all know, once you are neck deep in production you sometimes lose touch in what is good and what is not. I would love to get some honest feedback from my peers! Here is our latest video:


     


    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9WQZs2dh06g

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    Let me know what you think!


     


    -Sethward

  • June 22, 2012 12:56 PM PDT

    Production wise I think it's solid. I actually do comedy videos too and lately I've been trying to figure out ways to make it funnier. Your style seems more like college humor, but I feel like that's more entertaining to watch than laugh out loud funny. I think my videos are currently that way too, but my production is lacking a little. One of the things I'm beginning to realize about comedy is that it needs a 'stupid' factor. A lot of the skits on MadTv have that and Saturday Night Live. Those are some of the types of comedy I'm trying to emulate.


    You can also check out my channel and let me know what you think too: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DF1U4_jW4-c&feature=plcp