Sharing Short Video - Lenovo Seize The Night

How are you doing, 

I just wanted to introduce myself. I'm Xavier. I recently moved to California and I'll be starting grad school at USC this fall. You can find my portfolio here: http://www.quethelights.com

At the moment I'm participating in a competition known as Lenovo Seize The Night Alternate Ending Competition. 15 filmmakers got picked up to make alternate endings to this video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OoXr6sQlaRk

This is the alternate ending video I directed: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QSTFdk4GqBU&feature=youtu.be

And a behind the scenes: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vDTuQf4JJrg

I'd love to get your feedback on what you think of it!