Anyone want to read my script?

Howdy there all,

I'm looking for some fresh eyes to take a look at my script entitled Man vs. Self. I wrote it a few years ago, but recently a guy I work work with brought it up at a party and the guy he was talking to is willing to give us a small budget to shoot the first few scenes.

I've gone through it once already and made some minor updates, but nothing major. I'd love to hear what a few more people think needs work before I go through and do a serious rewrite.

Anyone interested?

Thanks!