MJ BrewerThe sound fluctuates in and out. Toward the ending there is a slight reverb, you might consider getting rid of. Plus, the soft music begins playing too soon.
Video wise, when they first begin talking, the camera is trying to fit both characters in, but... moreThe sound fluctuates in and out. Toward the ending there is a slight reverb, you might consider getting rid of. Plus, the soft music begins playing too soon.
Video wise, when they first begin talking, the camera is trying to fit both characters in, but fails. I would seriously consider reshooting this, as well as changing the title to an active one instead of with a passive "Asked." Realizing the person has already asked, you may want a different title.
Alex Sanchez<p>Na i totally getcha, student project for a class, 1st of the three. We were not expected to have great quality sound for first one. Few things got messed up on set with it, hence wierd reverb at the end. </p>
<p>The script was... more<p>Na i totally getcha, student project for a class, 1st of the three. We were not expected to have great quality sound for first one. Few things got messed up on set with it, hence wierd reverb at the end. </p>
<p>The script was given to us, all random sections from different movies. I will retitle it next time!</p>
MJ Brewer<p>The female in this performs relatively well, pausing, etc. at appropriate times. But there are a few places she needs to speak up. For a first project, it was excellent! With progress like this, you'll be doing great in no... more<p>The female in this performs relatively well, pausing, etc. at appropriate times. But there are a few places she needs to speak up. For a first project, it was excellent! With progress like this, you'll be doing great in no time.</p>
<p>Keep it up!</p>
Video wise, when they first begin talking, the camera is trying to fit both characters in, but... more
<p>The script was... more
<p>I am using them for my next project!!</p>