the WigWam TRibeThe opening txt doesnt feel cinematic to me...crazy effects tho.....id get rid of the opening credits and make the counting quicker..you loose momentum with the pauses....Great Images tho. Raise audio on the girl walking scene......cut heads at shot at... moreThe opening txt doesnt feel cinematic to me...crazy effects tho.....id get rid of the opening credits and make the counting quicker..you loose momentum with the pauses....Great Images tho. Raise audio on the girl walking scene......cut heads at shot at 4:50 can tell its start of a take...... you should figure out a better way for audio than camera audio...its very hard to hear at times.....esp the asian guy at 8 min scene....speaking of that shot of asian guy at 8:34 you should "raise" him up in the frame...so hes not so low....assuming of course you shot this in 16:9....then added bars....that scene in general...way too long.... Little girl scene was so poorly acted its distracting.....also watch the lights...they look unnatural...I dont mean to be snobbish..I am wishing you luck the best way I know how..by giving my honest opinion of what could improve. Overall audio needs major work....what you did with color and images in general was quite good. less
Covinfox Kao
Thank you so much, I appreciate your comments. Yeah I know there is still a huge space for me to improve. But.... I will never give up!!!! Thanks!
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